the time has again taken its toll on my life
and now there would be no masti no party and no strife
earlier i used to bunk the classes
sad part is now there wont be these chances
nahi hogi ab woh assignment ki sharing
aur ab nahi hogi woh ek dusre ke liye caring
in memory of u there would be many sleepless nights
and days would also be not that bright
i would be thinking about you all the time
smiling & crying both at the same time
wondering where has gone happiness of mine
and when would again come summer of sixty nine
life up ahead may be very serious
which eventually may turn out to be very hideous
in future i might feel very low
bcoz at times there may not be any place to go
then i wd think abt u guys
and my life wd again fill with joy
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Excellent poem ...
yeh collg chodne ka gum bahut saare logo ko kavi/shayr bana raha hai..
mujhe to lagta tha..ki apni class me shayd me hi acchi poems likhta hu ..
lekin this was awesome,can I cum for tutions to u of poetry
vaibhy...u r rocking ....man!!!!!! phodu poem likhi hai...ansu tapak rahe hain ise pad kar....kudossssss dude...i will also cm up wid mine soon ....till den ...take care n do remember i miss u all badly..thnks 4 givin me sm most lovly moments of my life...thnks 4 everythin...
are khandu bhai jyada chadhao mat.aur kya tuition ki baat kar rahe ho aap h to hamari inspiration ho.....
thanx kuku for ur nice commnets...hope u had enjoyed
hi man... u r surely a Robert Frost in making dude....... gr8 work....
hey!
good job there wid d peom...made me feel nostalgic as well!!
amazing stuff!;)
keep it up!!
guys meri poem bhi dekh hi lo...
The life is no more...
after the glorious yrs four
the infinitesimal short Engg
has passed away in a flash
the daily ride to d collg
will b replaced by sumthing else
the masti,the bakar,the farziness
will never b in sense
God jus do me a favour
never let me lose any of my friends
d heart will beat d same
till d life ends
but now it 'll b never as it did in IET's winds and
lands
heyy vaibhav....never knew this side of urs...gr8 work yaaar
u made me really senti yaar
its stramge the way we will now meet infrequentlty after spending so much time together....but as is true...life goes on and so shud we...but d sweet memories of time spent with u will always remain in my heart...i'm gonna miss u
hmmmm... i think this indeed matches the state of mind of everyone of us without an exception...... and putting it this way, vaibhav it's really worth tons of appreciations...
just that, it's very important that this nostalgia which is airing around these days, doesn't really make it difficult for us to move on..... rather taking along our friends would infact make our ways easier......
nice work vaibhav... keep blogging.... seeking to read more from you....
Cool man.....this is bound to get many nostalgic. Keep rockin...I'm adding a link to this blog to my blog !
P.S. : The last line's "Fill", right !
hi guys,
have made two changes;
1st-fill ko feel likh diya tha (mere saath aisa hota hai..)in last line as pointed by shiv in his comment.so have corrected it.
2nd- have changed 3rd last line on suggestion of musti earlier it was "i may face get many severe blows"
by vaibhav
hmmmm... i think this indeed matches the state of mind of everyone of us without an exception...... and putting it this way, vaibhav it's really worth tons of appreciations...
just that, it's very important that this nostalgia which is airing around these days, doesn't really make it difficult for us to move on..... rather taking along our memories should infact make our ways easier......
nice work vaibhav... keep blogging.... seeking to read more from you....
wow...graet so nice kya baat hai...kya likhte hai aap..
aap ke dil ka haal bya karti hai ye poem ...its awesome..aap ka ek naya roop dekhne ko mila aaj...
keep it up....
made me too nostalgic..my days @ college came b4 my eyes as in a movie was on roll..i wish i cud go back..n relive those days again with unknwn ppl who came across as FRIENDS..
gud work Vaibhav..too gud..wakt ne sach tujhe shayar bana dia :)
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